Sunday, 25 December 2011

Main task - Pre-production - First draft of script.

The last word

Main task - diary entry five

After going through my first script i have decided that my first story line is not a strong idea for a thriller film. Therefore i have changed my idea so it fits in better with the genre. I have written my script and i believe that it may be too long so therefore i will cut it down when reading through again.

Monday, 5 December 2011

Saturday, 3 December 2011

Main task - Pre production - My pitch.

Pitch

Feedback
The feedback from the class that came with my pitch was good and helpful. They seemed to really like the idea of the story. They gave me such feedback as being interested in the story enough to want to know what else happens. They also wanted to know what war do the men return from and also they wanted to know if the men were American or British.